Sample Script (Partial) Nueva Creacion Community Visions

1. EXT. WEST KENSINGTON NEIGHBORHOOD - DAY

A rapid montage reveals scenes from the neighborhood. A neighborhood basketball game, people waiting for the bus, and a dog eating rice and beans on a porch. The images begin to get progressively violent, however, as the sounds of sirens and gunshots become prominent. At the end of the montage, a basketball rolls from a playground to a large pile of garbage, and stops in a mud puddle.

The title "Peace in the Goodlands/Paz en Las Buenas Tierras" is written in chalk on the sidewalk.

2. EXT. MEMORIAL MURAL - DAY

Against the backdrop of the mural are candles, wilted flowers, a teddy bear and 40's that have been left behind.

YOUTHS' VOICE-OVER
(Several layered voices)

The Badlands. They call this the Badlands. They call US the Badlands.

3. NEWSCASTS

TV footage mentioning the "The Badlands" as the scene of a recent shooting, drug busts, etc.

4. EXT. MEMORIAL SITE -NIGHT

A mother lays a wreath of flowers in front of the memorial mural.

YOUTH ONE VOICE

They dump garbage here. They dump cars here. But this is my home. You don't have the right to call it the Badlands. I live here.

5. NEWSPAPER CLIPPINGS

A montage of newspaper clippings about the neighborhood: toxic dumping, test scores at a local school, a closed factory, police shooting, etc.

YOUTHS' VOICE-OVER
(Several layered voices)

The only time it seems we make the news is when something goes bad.

Every time something goes bad, they'll have a sound truck out here filming. When do they ever show the good in our community? How can they call us the Badlands?

Shot list (Partial)

  1. EXT. WEST KENSINGTON NEIGHBORHOOD - DAY

    (Delias' idea of following a person with head phones on, listening to the rap interspersed with shots of her from different angles and only the ambient traffic sounds)

    1. Low angle LS of basketball court. A handheld camera follows high school kids as they play a game of basketball
    2. MS of front stoop. People sit with babies in their arms, talking
    3. Handheld CU shot of men playing dominoes on the corner. The camera passes by the men and pans to a MS of a dog eating rice and beans on someone's front porch
    4. MS of the pinchos stand on the corner
    5. LS of children playing at playground
    6. Low angle MS of kids double-dutching on a play street, with water (either hydrant open or little swimming pools) in background
    7. High angle LS of Baptism or Sweet 16 in the church
    8. Dolly shot (maybe in a car) going by the fruit vendor
    9. Dolly shot (maybe in a car) going by Edison High School at dismissal
    10. Dolly shot (maybe in a car) going by the people waiting for the bus at Freddy & Tony's
    11. LS cop cars racing by with sirens wailing
    12. LS of children huddled in a corner
    13. MS of basketball players' quick movements
    14. CU of people fighting
    15. CU of basketball players' quick movements
    16. LS of people dumping garbage
    17. CU pan of basketball rolling into puddle and resting in front of garbage pile

1A. EXT. WEST KENSINGTON NEIGHBORHOOD - DAY

    1. CU of the title "Peace in the Goodlands/Paz en Las Buenas Tierras" written in chalk on the sidewalk
    2. Titles over the scene: Peace in the Goodlands, a production of Centro Nueva Creacion. This video shows the work of Centro Nueva Creacion in the area of Philadelphia often called "The Badlands". It is a record of hope for the people in our community, especially our youth

Shooting Script (Partial)

1. EXT. WEST KENSINGTON NEIGHBORHOOD - DAY

    1. Low angle LS of basketball court. A handheld camera follows high school kids as they play a game of basketball
    2. MS of basketball players' quick movements
    3. CU of basketball players' quick movements
    4. LS of people fighting
    5. MS of people fighting
    6. CU of people fighting
    7. CU pan of basketball rolling into puddle and resting in front of garbage pile
    8. MS of front stoop. People sit with babies in their arms, talking
    9. Handheld CU shot of men playing dominoes on the corner. The camera passes by the men and pans to a MS of a dog eating rice and beans on someone's front porch
    10. LS of children huddled in a corner
    11. LS cop cars racing by with sirens wailing
    12. LS of people dumping garbage

Shooting Schedule (Partial)

Saturday, July 12th
Location: Basketball Court (street name)
Scene 1 - Neighborhood montage

Crew Call: 9:00 AM
Cast Call: 10:00 AM

Shot 17 - CU pan of basketball rolling into puddle and resting in front of garbage pile
Shot 1 - Low angle LS of basketball court. A handheld camera follows high school kid as they play a game of basketball
Shot 13 - MS of basketball players' quick movements
Shot 15 - CU of basketball players' quick movements

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